Monthly Archives: April 2012
Caroline
This is a song I wrote for my girlfriend while she was away for a month. This is what we look like when we pose for pictures:
The instruments I use are: classical guitar and banjo
I recorded it on: crappy Sony recording software
It sounds like this:
The Break Down
This tile, “The Break Down,” can allude to an array of different topics and directions that this blog post can escape into. For instance, I could be talking about the importance of breakdowns in a piece of metal music. Or, I might be talking about mental collapse. Maybe I’m having car trouble…
Rather, I would like to “break down” my last post so that it doesn’t go largely misunderstood. Parts of it are incredibly esoteric and other parts are written in my own word codes. Hence, I feel it necessary to “break down” my word reasons in my last poem so that I don’t experience mental collapse and, consequently, break down. I’m still going to leave some parts of the poem unanswered – as one man said in the obscenity trial of Ginsberg’s Howl, “Poetry can’t be translated into prose. That is why it is poetry.” – but I do think that there are some inherent historical examples within the poem that need mentioning. This might be moderately conceited for me to do, but so it goes. So here is the poem, again, with the director commentary turned on:
Cumming of a Creed
What we need
Is the cumming of a creed:
A doctrine of divinity that
Shakes human from slumber:
Words of thunder
Instantaneous
To the strike of wonder:
There are no seconds to count (counting time between lightning and thunder)
Between what comes forth:
And what comes fourth
Is always wonder,
Preceding
Curiosity, amazement, bafflement.
Wonder is the most common
Denominator amongst demigods
Such as ourselves.
Ourselves as barb ells
Of differing masses:
For we all possess
Sharp, measuring minds (“barbs” are sharp – “ells” measure)
With their own
Gravitational pull. (the gravitational pull of an object depends on its mass)
Impatience and
Low tolerance to time
Has left us lightwaits. (one who does not like to wait)
Forever abandon the now,
And start the next,
Forever.
Beginning next
This creed shall be of us,
By us,
For us,
In the Abrahamic tradition. (“…of the people, by the people, for the people…” is from the Gettysburg Address, spoken by “Abraham” Lincoln. I’m playing off the Christian, Jewish and Islamic Abrahamic traditions.
It shall encompass
Perfection,
And end compass
Directions.
It shall guide us astray
To the ashtrays
Of our minds
Where thoughts are pinched out
Embers
Laying in heaps
Of perceptual filters,
Yet shielding the Formica countertop
Of life
From collecting dust.
It shall explode
Explode
**EXPLODE**
Upon the Hiroshima
Of humdrum humanity,
And
The Nagasaki
Of dismal dailies. (dropings of the atomic bombs in WWII)
It shall be a specter haunting. You erupt (Marx’s Communist Manifesto starts off, “There is a specter haunting Europe – the specter of communism.” Vietnam War was a war against Communists)
27 years later (amount of time between WWII and Vietnam War)
When the values
That vested you
Are vaporized off your body by
Napalm napalm napalm napalm napalm
During Vietnamese Kodak moments (famous picture of little girl with clothing burned off by napalm during the Vietnam War. Google “Vietnam napalm” and you’ll find it.)
That warp your face
Into Edvard Munch hallucinations (Edvard Munch painted “The Scream.” The facial expression in the painting looks similar to the faces in the napalm picture.)
Of harrowing beauty.
It shall Socratically “WHY?” you (Socratic method of asking “why?” repeatedly)
While you worry “why YOU?”
Until your ever present thoughts (“ever present” = ubiquitous)
Strip the Y U
From intellectual ubi-quity, (take away the Y and U, and your left with bi-quit. To quit twice.
And you declare “I know nothing” (quote attributed to Socrates)
For the second time.
It shall deflower your comprehension
With Joycean oceans (James Joyce used a lot of poetic codes and riddles in his writing)
Of cryptic cry,
And it won’t call the next day.
Or the next.
It shall be
Crowley (Aleister Crowley, but also an allusion of a circling crow of death)
Circling above
The flower of truth,
Waiting to descend
Once “what thou wilt” (“Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law” – Aleister Crowley)
Wilts petals into wonder.
And word thunder
Will rumble
As long as
Tongues tumble,
And tongues tumble
All down to the bottom,
Because even this
Fall has an autumn.
Cumming of a Creed
What we need
Is the cumming of a creed:
A doctrine of divinity that
Shakes human from slumber:
Words of thunder
Instantaneous
To the strike of wonder:
There are no seconds to count
Between what comes forth:
And what comes fourth
Is always wonder,
Preceding
Curiosity, amazement, bafflement.
Wonder is the most common
Denominator amongst demigods
Such as ourselves.
Ourselves as barb ells
Of differing masses:
For we all possess
Sharp, measuring minds
With their own
Gravitational pull.
Impatience and
Low tolerance to time
Has left us lightwaits.
Forever abandon the now,
And start the next,
Forever.
Beginning next
This creed shall be of us,
By us,
For us,
In the Abrahamic tradition.
It shall encompass
Perfection,
And end compass
Directions.
It shall guide us astray
To the ashtrays
Of our minds
Where thoughts are pinched out
Embers
Laying in heaps
Of perceptual filters,
Yet shielding the Formica countertop
Of life
From collecting dust.
It shall explode
Explode
**EXPLODE**
Upon the Hiroshima
Of humdrum humanity,
And
The Nagasaki
Of dismal dailies.
It shall be a specter haunting. You erupt
27 years later
When the values
That vested you
Are vaporized off your body by
Napalm napalm napalm napalm napalm
During Vietnamese Kodak moments
That warp your face
Into Edvard Munch hallucinations
Of harrowing beauty.
It shall Socratically “WHY?” you
While you worry “why YOU?”
Until your ever present thoughts
Strip the Y U
From intellectual ubi-quity,
And you declare “I know nothing”
For the second time.
It shall deflower your comprehension
With Joycean oceans
Of cryptic cry,
And it won’t call the next day.
Or the next.
It shall be
Crowley
Circling above
The flower of truth,
Waiting to descend
Once “what thou wilt”
Wilts petals into wonder.
And word thunder
Will rumble
As long as
Tongues tumble,
And tongues tumble
All down to the bottom,
Because even this
Fall has an autumn.
“Bad Fences Make Bad Neighbors”
This is my first post in about a week because of my six-day work week and all my free time spent either with my girlfriend or working on the prospects of writing a Holy Book. I have a poetic introduction to this (most serious joke) book in the works which I will eventually post, but in the meantime this is a piece I did last year that I will post for the sake of saving this blog from lapsing into a full on coma.
“Something there is that doesn’t love a wall”
During epiphanies of disinterest with the self.
Something there is, in moments of clarity,
That doesn’t love the big blinding barricades
Constructed from the bricks of right or wrong,
This way or that, A or B, true or false…
Stones of perceived mathematical objectivity.
Language is the foreman of such mental masonry.
When courage is gathered to climb over these walls,
Leaving behind one’s Humpty Dumpty fears,
The ego erodes to uncover the bottom layer:
A layer deeper than the crust of character and
Even deeper than the mantle of one’s mannerisms;
Down to the pineal core where one finds that
“Something there is that doesn’t love a wall.”
Impromptu
I tried writing a quick poem under five minutes with whatever came to my head first. I was sort-of inspired by Gertrude Stein’s stream-of-consciousness style and Ginsberg’s “first thought, best thought”, although this misses the mark of those poetic prophets.
If it doesn’t burn
You should have no problem
Interrupting erupting embers
With your cold touch,
Shift with clutch,
Don’t take much of such
With a grain of salt… halt.
Give it a break
For time-breach sake,
Don’t make – if you can’t relate
Come back around,
With walls of sound,
Beat to the ground.
Compound and compensate
For what you can’t make;
Two hands will shake
To seal one’s fate.
Ambiguity spawns ingenuity,
Embellished with stupidity
Cuz I don’t have this planed
Man.
Make the consonants crack
By loosening slack
Between word rhythms.
It’s culinary for your soul kitchen.
Often,
It don’t take enough
To pull a diamond from the rough
So either keep pressing on
Or call my bluff.